Thank you for posting on "Show me your art II". I didn't had Internet access for a few months so I couldn't answer earlier and now the thread is closed, but here is my honest critique:
Everything look really nice, it is hard work I can tell right away and it looked really familiar to me when I first saw the thumbnail now I see why. Really great great job, you could do a great stopmotion with that also. The only thing you need to get a good presentation of it, especially when talking about virtual images, is to get a good picture. Maybe a warmer light instead of camera flash, or get another camera which I wouldn't do because DSC-H20 is a great camera. at least for this is a great camera. Don't trust any automatic mode of a digital camera try to take control of it and make it as manual as possible. balance you whites with a paper sheet, get good lightning and try some photoshop tricks to make it look more soft and to show up your art better, because this is really good.